i'll try not to be such a douche bag with this one
the piano was great. i love the melody and it sounds sweet (except for some clicky sound that can be heard subtly underneath).
the transition however when the drums comes in is awkward. it feels empty and needs some more stuff going on, i suggest reverse cymbal or anything really. also with the drum beat, make it more of an actual beat for instance: kick hat snare hat to say the least instead of the snare every beat.
for your bass, the bassline was simple and it works with the song, but the instrument itself sounded very bad (wayyyyyyyy too distorted). i suggest using another preset or try making your own but no matter what you gotta change it haha.